I think. my protagonist Mark is whinny. No
scratch that he IS whinny. I’m still struggling with the first draft but
I cannot ignore the feeling that this is a setback. I really fear that readers will
hate him for that. Besides I hate whinny characters, Go figure!
In my head I see him perfectly, how
he speaks, moves, fights, laughs I can almost feel him, but when it comes to
application words delude me, on paper he’s an annoying little brat! (Ugh! It
hurts me deeply to say that, forgive me Mark, please forgive me :(
Ok snap out of it!
Mark is the only son of his family,
he’s rich, hard headed and spoiled and sometimes awfully rude!
He has a quite complicated
relationship with his parents and because of that he possess this tendency to
hurt those who are close to him, who genuinely care for him. I need to tune his rudeness down a bet though,
after all -vampire or not- he is still a gentile(vamp) in the nineteenth
century, he can’t be walking around bashing whatever he dislikes and shooting
bad words on people, women included. Or can he?
Actually putting all that aside, when he’s not in one of his aggressive moods Mark can be lavishly charming, I know he’s my character but this is how I imagined him from the start, and this the outcome I’m doing my best to display accurately (did I actually said that boring line?!)
Actually putting all that aside, when he’s not in one of his aggressive moods Mark can be lavishly charming, I know he’s my character but this is how I imagined him from the start, and this the outcome I’m doing my best to display accurately (did I actually said that boring line?!)