State of day. Thank you for the sweeties who wished
me a happy birthday yesterday, I’m not really a birthday girl, no parties, ever.
I just like to post some balloons on my blog and smile. But when people do
mention it; it still brings a nice feeling so thank you from the heart…again.
……………………………………………………………………………
Now…Guess who made it to C-day? 8)
Truth. C-guy here gave me a hard time. I couldn’t
find a word so fulfilling to make a poem happen all around it. I’ve already
scheduled some posts but this one was left vacant. Besides, I was so
hung up on using the S sound I practically cornered myself, I wanted a word
like cipher or cinereous or even Cimmerian (yes, that last one’s ghastly. I know).
But then I realized I already have the perfect word, the one containing
everything I need.
Heck! The word for me. Go figure :|
I knew I wanted a semi-Acrostic poem and
it took me mere minutes to come up with one, here it is for you;
Captain
Come now, you know me
And I thought you’re better than that
Playing amnesiac will never suite you
Trying so hard to act cooler
Asking me questions like “who are you?”
I may be too quiet, too distant too unpopular enough but
Not even you can forget the Captain who saved your life on
day two!
:) Nice play with the letters and lines. And belated happy birthday! :)
ReplyDelete@TarkabarkaHolgy from
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Thanks, don't worry you're not late :)
DeleteYour closing lines are always the best! I leave wanting to know more of the story.
ReplyDeletewhy how nice of you, I know my poems sound more like stories and so, maybe I will pick up where I left later after all.
DeleteLove that closing line! Like C. Lee, I want to know more. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks Tyrean.
DeleteWhat a fun way to write a poem. I love it, and I love the final line. Great piece!
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the 2015 A to Z Challenge!
A to Z Co-Host S. L. Hennessy
http://pensuasion.blogspot.com
Apparently I'm a last line killer :P thanks.
DeleteHappy belated! What an original and ambitious approach to the A to Z. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteI blame my current trend of reading sports manga, but I totally see this as a team captain standing up for an underclassman. Love it.
ReplyDeleteHappy belated birthday! Cute poem.
ReplyDelete~Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
Member of C. Lee's Muffin Commando Squad
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