Monday, April 27, 2015

W = Wait



Wait

Wait!
Don’t go
You can’t leave me now
I stopped my life on you
You left me a barren existence
and I suffered
all the woes that followed
so I deserted warmth
Preparing for this meeting
Now that you fell under my radar again
I refuse to let you go
I have a clear shot

 You took his life now I will take yours.



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  1. AnonymousApril 27, 2015 at 5:35 PM

    Visiting you in these last days of the #Challenge. A treat to find your poem for the letter W today. If you have any energy left, come see what I've been up to. It has been great fun, don't you agree?

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    1. Haneen IbrahimApril 28, 2015 at 1:35 PM

      Thanks Stepheny, I know right? who believes I'm still standing. I'll do my best to make it.

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  2. AnonymousApril 27, 2015 at 11:36 PM

    Powerful poem. Great job with W.

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  3. Salvwi PrasadApril 28, 2015 at 12:53 AM

    Strong emotions Haneen. Good one. :)
    The last line , slightly scary though.

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    1. Haneen IbrahimApril 28, 2015 at 1:49 PM

      Thank youoooo :) Ha! I know, it's kind of creepy heheh.

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  4. Barbara In CaneyheadApril 28, 2015 at 4:58 AM

    Good poem, though a little dark for my taste. I adore your blog title! Is it after the Barry White song?
    ~ The end is in sight!!! ~
    Visit me at: Life & Faith in Caneyhead
    I am Ensign B of Tremps' Troops
    with the A to Z Challenge

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    1. Haneen IbrahimApril 28, 2015 at 1:54 PM

      O Hello there :) Thanks for visiting. Yea this one is darker than the rest I guess, but you can go look at the previous ones, you may find one you will like. The theme is dark but not to the extreme.

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  5. A Tarkabarka HölgyApril 28, 2015 at 6:29 AM

    Strong poem, and a hint of desperation comes through. Well done!

    @TarkabarkaHolgy from
    Multicolored Diary - Epics from A to Z
    MopDog - 26 Ways to Die in Medieval Hungary

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